i never thought id feel this way
never feel this sad
i never knew i would sink this low
never feel this bad
my heart is aching
i think its breaking
im feeling this way
dont want it to stay
im tired of this
tired of it all
tired of the way i think
tired of wondering when to fall
fall down into a pit of despair
im sinking faster
theres nomore air
im so close to crying
feel like im dying
but I doubt you care
you wont
youre not there
everybody knows youre not worth it
and here still i sit
torn between fear
a broken heart
and torn with you
a whisper in my ear
too much to smile?
too much to talk?
i guess ill go stroll
ill take this walk
and as my stupid tears stream down in a race
my heart still holds your sweet little face
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I wrote this awhile ago...dunno exact date.
You can critique it if you'd like, I wanna see how I write to the people of dA. Also keep in mind that I'm no professional xD There isn't supposed to be any punctuation on purpose, if anybody is wondering. Maybe it's time I got noticed as a writer ? Enjoyyyy<3 |
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(this is paige btw)
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"Then I rip your bean off paifully betwen my teeth and lock you in a cage without letting you shower, and I feed you sour bread for the next 5 years. THE END"
"I like snails, just not when they're on the bottom of my shoe."
haha, i knowwww...i dun think i'm watching you on here XDD
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hope that it was worth it
'cause i love those dreams
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"Then I rip your bean off paifully betwen my teeth and lock you in a cage without letting you shower, and I feed you sour bread for the next 5 years. THE END"
"I like snails, just not when they're on the bottom of my shoe."
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